2010年中考英语满分作文2

 福建福州卷
    中考真题
    为满足人们日益增长的健身需求，我国政府于 2009 年将每年的 8 月 8 日定为“全民健身日”。今年的“全民健身日”即将来临，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文报纸举办了一场征文比赛。现在请你以“Let's Do Sports”为题写一篇短文，向该报投稿。
    内容提示：
    Do you think it is important for everyone to do sports?
    What sports do you like? Why do you like it／them?
    Do you often do sports with your friends and parents?
    How often and how long do you do sports?
    How do you feel after doing sports?
    要求：1．短文词数 80 左右；
    2．必须包括上述提示内容，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可适当发挥；
    3．短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
    Let's Do Sports
    名师解析
    1．试题解读
    本文为典型的半开放式作文，以在“全民健身日”即将来临之际，呼吁人们参加体育活动为话题。此话题紧跟时代步伐，有较强的现实感，使考生很容易下笔。但如果想使自己的作品成为一篇考场佳作，考生必须在语言组织上多下工夫，注意高级词汇的选择、复杂句式的运用以及句子信息的有效整合。
    2．写作信息要点
    (1) 锻炼身体对于每个人来说都很重要。
    (2) 你喜欢的运动及选择该运动的理由。
    (3) 你平时运动的时间及运动后的感想。
    3．可用素材
    (1) 词汇：
    play an important part in，take part in，various，favorite，keep fit，relax．
    (2) 句式：
    ① As we all know，sports play a very important role in our daily life．
    ② When I am free，I always take part in some sports together with my parents．
    ③ Not only can we feel very relaxed，but we can also get enough energy to prepare for our lessons．
    ④ In short，sports can bring us a lot of good in our lives．
    4．注意事项
    (1) 应以第一人称和一般现在时态为主。
    (2) 所写内容必须围绕文中所提供的要点，发挥和补充应适度。
    (3) 合理使用过渡性词语，以增强文章的连贯性。
    满分文展示 1
    Let's Do Sports
    (①With the National Fitness Day approaching，)more and more people want to take part in sports of different kinds．(②In my opinion，doing sports is very necessary，which can build up our bodies and relax ourselves as well．)In my spare time，I often invite my parents or friends to do sports，such as table tennis，football，volleyball and so on．(③After that，)(④not only can we feel very relaxed，but we can also get enough energy to prepare for our lessons．)
    In short，sports can bring us a lot of good in our lives．(⑤It is，therefore，strongly suggested that we should spare some time to take an active part in various kinds of sports．
    旁批
    1．此句应用 with 的复合结构引出文章开头，为下文埋下了伏笔，同时也充分展示了作者很强的驾驭语言能力，给阅卷人留下了很好的第一印象。
    2．此句 doing sports is very necessary 为动名词作主语的结构，此外，句中应用了 which 引导的非限定性定语从句，使句子具有层次感。
    3．看似不起眼的 after that 却把前后句子紧密地衔接在一起，使文章过渡自然、顺畅。
    4．此句应用了 not only... but also... 构成的倒装句式，表达了作者对体育运动的认识。句子运用准确、地道，充分展示了作者深厚的语法功底。
    5．这句话是对全文的升华，更明确地表明了作者对体育运动的认识。
    满分揭秘
    本文体现着很强的时代气息。作者能够按照试题要求准确地表达出所有的要点，思路清晰，语言顺畅，注意到句型的变换和运用。文章句式灵活，with 的复合结构，定语从句，及倒装句式均在本文中有所体现，达到了满分作文的要求。
    标准范文
Let's Do Sports
    I think it's very important for everyone to do sports．I like sports because they're not only good for my health but also good for my study．My favorite sport is swimming．Whenever I am free，I will have a swim with my friends or my parents in the swimming pool．After swimming，I usually feel happy and relaxed．What's more，I can put more energy into my study．So let's do sports，and we will become stronger and stronger．
   
江苏苏州卷
    中考真题
    假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲 I Believe I Can Fly。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛。