2010年中考英语满分作文3

 江苏南京卷
    中考真题
    假如你是王林，你的美国朋友 Daniel 将来南京学习，他想了解所到中学附近的滨江图书馆(Binjiang Public Library)。请根据海报中的信息，给他发一封电子邮件，介绍滨江图书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。
    注意：1．电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
    2．语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
    3．词数 80 左右，电子邮件的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
    Binjiang Public Library
    Over 900000 books and 13000 electronic journals
    Location：18 Binjiang Road，Jianye District
    Open：8:00 a.m．(Mon．— Fri．) 9:00 a.m．(Sat．& Sun．)
    Closed：5:00 P.m．(Mon．— Fri．) 8:00 P.m．(Sat．& Sun．)
    Sections：Loan Desk(借书处)，Reading Room，Computing Room．
    Electronic Resources(资源)，Children's Story Corner．Book Shop...
    Functions：
    Borrow & return books
    search for information on the Internet
    ...
    Dear Daniel，
    I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing．_______
    Yours sincerely，
    Wang Lin
    名师解析
    1．试题解读
    这种题型的作文相对来说好写：首先，认真阅读给出的海报，把海报上简短的英文补充成完整的英语句子。其次，理清文章结构，划分段落。
    按照海报上的提示顺序，先谈一下该图书馆的位置，藏书量。接着介绍开门、关门的时间。最后介绍图书馆的几个部分。
    2．写作信息要点
    (1) 藏书量，位置。
    (2) 营业时间。
    (3) 组成部分及其功能。
    3．可用素材
    ① The library is at 18 Binjiang Road，Jianye District，which has over 900000 books and 13000 electronic journals．
    ② It opens at 8:00 a.m．and closes at 5:00 p.m．from Monday to Friday，but on Saturday and Sundays，it opens at 9:00 a.m．and closes at 8:00 p.m．
    ③ Loan Desk is the place where books are borrowed and returned．
    ④ To search for information on the Internet，we can go to the Computing Room．
    4．注意事项
    (1) 海报上的内容不可缺少。
    (2) 尽可能地使用多变的语法句式，为文章挣得多个得分点。
    满分文展示 1
    Dear Daniel，
    I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing．(①I'd like to tell you something about Binjiang Public Library．)
    (②The library is at 18 Binjiang Road，Jianye District，which has over 900000 books and 13000 electronic journals．)(③It opens at 8:00 a.m．and closes at 5:00 p.m．from Monday to Friday，but on Saturday and Sundays，it opens at 9:00 a.m．and closes at 8:00 p.m．)
    There are several sections in the library．(④Loan Desk is the place where books are borrowed and returned．)In the Reading Room，we can read different books and magazines．There are a lot of electric resources．(⑤To search for information on the Internet，we can go to the Computing Room．)The library also has a Children's Story Corner，where children can find their favorite books．The Book Shop of the library offers different kinds of books．
    (⑥I hope you'll like the library．)I'm looking forward to seeing you．
    Yours sincerely，
    Wang Lin
    2．巧妙地使用非限制性定语从句，把要表达的两个内容揉成一个复合句，很不简单。
    3．用 but 完整不漏地把海报上有关开门和关门的时间全部表达出来。
    4．利用定语从句，把借书处和其功能结合在一起，同时又使文章的句式错落有致，长短句交相辉映。在定语从句中，使用被动语态，说明作者有驾驭英语句型的能力。
    5．用不定式作目的状语，反映作者良好的语法底蕴。
    6．呼应写信的目的。
    满分揭秘
    本文是一篇优秀的中考临场作文，具体表现在：考生在理解题目的要求上能够准确、细致；在组织材料上能够做到具体全面；在语言表达上能够做到清晰、规范、严谨、多变。特别是一些丰富的句式，如定语从句的使用，提升了文章的档次。全文如行云流水，值得广大中学生借鉴。
    标准范文
    Dear Daniel，
    I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing．Here's some information about Binjiang Public Library．
    The library，located at 18 Binjiang Road，has over 900000 books and 13000 electronic journals．It is open from 8:00 a.m．to 5:00 p.m．on weekdays．On weekends it is open for 11 hours．It is a good place for people to read and borrow books．