你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是 Learning to get along with our parents.请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:
现象 |
经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话 |
原因 |
1.父母过分关注分数 2.我们…… |
措施(不少于三点) |
1.我们应该和父母沟通 2.我们…… 3.我们…… |
要求:1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2) 必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3) 词数:100 词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is Learning to get along with our parents.
These days,most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.________ _________
That's all for my speech.Thank you!
名师解析
1.试题解读
这是一种半开放的题型:针对部分学生跟父母相处不好的现象,谈一下常见的表现并分析原因,提出解决措施。对于此类文章,作者应该直接
描述一下当前的这种情况,引出话题。对于原因的分析,作者有发挥的余地。在措施的处理上,一定要写三条。如再能注意句式多变,用词新颖,将会使文章与众不同。
2.写作信息要点
(1) 经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话
(2) 原因一:父母过分关注分数
原因二:我们的理由(自拟)
(3) 措施一:我们应该和父母沟通
措施二、三(自拟)
3.可用素材
(1) 词汇:
care for/about,get angry with,harder,talk with,share ideas,tired,fight,understand,wrong...
(2) 句式:
① That's why we often get angry with our parents.
② We are too tired to move on further.
③ It is wrong to get angry with our parents.
4.注意事项
(1) 因为是演讲稿,所以要多使用简单句,以增加口语的感召力;
(2) 适当准确地使用过渡词、连词,让文章连贯自然;
(3) 尽可能地使用多变的语法句式,为文章挣得多个得分点。
满分文展示 1
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is Learning to get along with our parents.
These days,most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.Our parents care too much for our studying marks.We have to study harder to meet their higher hope.That's why we often get angry with our parents.Sometimes we even don't talk with them for several days.We have too much to learn.We are too tired to move on further.When we can't control our feelings,there is always a fight between parents and us.
We should think about the ways to get along well with our parents.On one hand,we should often talk with our parents and let them know our feelings and thoughts.On the other hand,we should understand our parents and try our best in every subject.Besides,it is wrong to get angry with our parents.We should love our parents.We shouldn't make them sad.
That's all for my speech.Thank you!
旁批
1.先说出原因。两个单句,前因后果。为下文做铺垫。
2.顺理成章,引起现象的发生。使用 why 引导的表语从句,很值得提倡。复合句、简单句。错落有序,参差见美。
3.两个简单句,非常地道,并引起下文。
4.使用状语从句。进一步强调现象的发生。
5.用连接性副词列举,是文章的一大亮点。用 and 表示先后,连接两个谓语动词,效果很好。
满分揭秘
本文是一篇优秀的中考临场作文,具体表现在:考生把握住演讲稿的特点,使用强有力的简单句,通过缜密的连接技巧,使得行文不枯燥,有味道。能够准确
地理解表格内容,合理地组织材料,自成段落。文章字字铿锵,掷地有声,意义深远。
标准范文
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is Learning to get along with our parents.
These days,most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents,so quarrels often break out between the two generations,even we don't chat several days.Then how does this come about? I think there are some reasons for this below: