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2010年中考英语满分作文3(4)


作者:deadmin 来源:未知 发布时间:2013-05-27 阅读次数:





    Firstly,our parents pay too much attention to grades.They think grades are the most important.And secondly,we are growing up step by step and becoming independent.We have our own different views,and are far away from our parents' satisfaction.
    Therefore,we should strengthen the communication between us and parents and exchange each other's ideas.There is no doubt that we can live with our parents better if we put heart into it.
山东临沂卷
    中考真题
    假如你叫李华,是九年级一班的学生,暑假即将来临,学校准备组织部分学生参加暑假公益活动。表格中是学校安排的两项活动及要求,请按照你自己的意愿和特长选择其中一项,然后根据你的选择和问题提示,给活动负责人郝老师用英语写一封电子邮件,提出申请。
    注意:1.词数:80 — 100;
    2.短文中不要出现考生的姓名、学校及其他相关信息中心;
    3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
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Project What to do When
Old people's home visit Cheer them up
Do some chores
Every Tuesday morning
 
Kids' summer camp Teach them to read
Teach them to look after themselves
Every Friday afternoon
 
    问题提示(电子邮件须包含下列要点)
    1.Which project do you want to choose?
    2.Why do you want to choose it?
    3.How are you going to do it well?
    Dear Mr Hao,
    I'm Li Hua,a student from Class One,Grade Nine.I read your notice yesterday._________________
    I'm looking forward to your answer soon.
    Best wishes,
    Li Hua
    名师解析
    1.试题解读
    从题干的要求来看,这篇中考作文要求考生写一封申请信,申请信是一种常见应用文文体,为考生所熟悉。就该篇书面表达来看,写作的内容是供选择的,考生可以根据自己的喜好选取表格中所提供的两个项目中的一个,可供选择的材料就为考生提供了发挥自己写作特长的余地,考生不仅可以选择自己感兴趣的话题,还应考虑选取可以便于自己发挥的话题。在写作的过程中,题干中所提供的问题提示应作为考生写作时的参考内容,在电子邮件中体现对这些问题的说明。
    2.写作信息要点
    (1) 在养老院帮助使老人们振作精神;
    (2) 利用周末帮助老人们做一些日常事务;
    (3) 参加孩子们的夏令营,教他们读书;
    (4) 每周五下午教孩子们学会生活自理。
    3.可用素材
    (1) 词汇:
    visit,old people's home,cheer up,do some chores,meaningful,project,happy,summer camp,take care of,help... with
    (2) 句式:
    ① I'd like to visit old people's home.
    ② The reason I want to take part in kids' summer camp is that they need help.
    ③ We can help old people do some chores.
    ④ First of all we should teach the kids how to look after themselves.
    ⑤ we'll make it a rule to visit them every Friday afternoon.
    4.注意事项
    (1) 表格中所提供的两项活动在文章中只需体现一种,无需二者都涉及;
    (2) 写作内容应涉及问题提示中所提供的三个方面,不可偏废任何一点;
    (3) 应根据写作要点适当增加写作细节,以使文章内容丰富。
    满分文展示 1
    Dear Mr Hao,
    I'm Li Hua,a student from Class One,Grade Nine.I read your notice yesterday.(①I really think the two projects are very good.) I'd like to choose to visit the old people's home.(②We ail know that in our country many old people need to be taken good care of.) Some of them are often ill or feel lonely.(③So I think it's our duty to lend them a hand.) I have decided to go and stay with them every Tuesday morning.(④I can sing songs for them and play games with them to cheer them up.) (⑤Also),I'll take some flowers and other presents to them.Of course,I'll help clean rooms,wash clothes and do other chores.(⑥I'm sure that I can bring happiness to them.)

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