I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours faithfully，
Zhang Hua
浙江杭州卷
中考真题
假如你是李明，你的笔友 Peter 将随团来你校进行为期一天的学习交流活动，请你将以下安排发邮件告知。
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学校安排上午活动 |
1．meet teachers and students
2．have a Chinese music class
3．learn how to make Chinese paper cut |
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你安排下午活动及理由 |
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注意：
1．内容必须包括上午的安排，下午的安排及理由；
2．开头已经为你写好，你只需接着写；
3．词数：70 个左右。开头和结尾部分内容不计入总词数。
Hi Peter，
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．______．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming
名师解析
1．试题解读
这则中考作文要求考生写一则电子邮件，内容是介绍一个为期一天学习交流活动的安排。其中下午活动在所给材料中没有给出，需要考生自己根据情况自行列出，并针对所列出的活动说明理由。故这则中考作文属于半开放式作文。前一部分关于上午的活动对于考生来说易于表达，而对于下午的活动则需要经过考生缜密的思考，列出合乎情理的活动及理由来。
2．可用素材
(1) 词汇：
activities，music class，paper cutting，suggest，reason，climb the hill，visit museums，have a party，have a good knowledge of，enjoy oneself
(2) 句式：
① In the morning，first you ought to meet our teachers and students．
② Having a Chinese music class is the next thing we do．
③ You will be taught how to do Chinese paper cut．
④ In the afternoon，you'll be guided to visit the People's Square where you can enjoy all kinds of performances．
⑤ I'm sure that you can enjoy yourself here．
4．注意事项
(1) 说明活动安排宜按
时间的顺序来说明了
(2) 因写邮件的目的是说明对未来时间的安排，故文章应主要采用将来时态说明；
(3) 对下午活动的安排应考虑其合理性。
满分文展示 1
Hi Peter，
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
(①In the morning after meeting our teachers and students，we will have a Chinese music class．)(②After that，you'll be taught how to make Chinese paper cut，)(③which you must be interested in．)
(④The arrangement of the afternoon is as follows．)(⑤First )we'll go to the seaside．On such a hot day，(⑥you're not more willing to swim in the sea．)(⑤Then) we can relax in the park in the centre of our city(⑤and) enjoy some wonderful performance of local opera．
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
Li Ming
旁批
1．该句用介词 after 短语很好地将事件的安排顺序表达了出来，同时使语言紧凑简洁。
2．以 after that 衔接，自然流畅，后面动词不定式和疑问词连用在句中充当宾语，为高级语法结构，使用恰当。
3．which 引导的非限定性定语从句使用准确，进一步展示了作者扎实的英语语法基本功。
4．该句在全文中起着承上启下的作用，增强了文章的流畅性。
5．first，then，and 这几个连接词的使用，使该段一气呵成，连贯自然。
6．此句使用的是否定词和比较级连用，表达“十分愿意”，结构高级，且增强了表达效果。
满分揭秘
文章分两个部分来说明，前面说明了上午的安排，较好地完成了题干中所给出的各信息。下面一段对下午的具体安排较为合理，以 first，then，and 等连词来连接，使该段脉络清晰，条理分明。文中不乏高级句式，非限定性定语从句及比较级和否定词连用表示最高级意义句式的使用更是锦上添花，为文章增加了亮点。
标准范文
Hi Peter，
I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit．
In the morning，you are supposed to meet our teachers and schoolmates first，and then have a Chinese music class．Next，you will be taught how to do Chinese paper cutting．
In the afternoon，I suggest you start by taking a boat trip on the West Lake．You'll admire the beautiful sights around the lake．Then you can visit some interesting museums and famous temples to get to know the history of the city．
