2010年中考英语满分作文1(5)

    I'm looking forward to seeing you soon．
    Li Ming
   
河南卷
    中考真题
    请以“_______ is fun”为题写一篇英语短文。
    要求：1．先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语，也可以是从句)；
    2．短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息；
    3．词数 80 左右。
    ______ is fun
    名师解析
    1．试题解读
    本文属于开放式作文，其特点是要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力和创造力，把所给题目补充完整，然后再根据所补充的题目设想内容要点，组织篇章结构。这就为考生张扬个性提供了广阔的空间，从而能够考查考生的发散思维和创新思维能力。
    2．写作信息要点
    (1) 简洁明了地引出主题。
    (2) 展开论述主题。
    (3) 照应开头，总结主题。
    3．可用素材
    (1) 词汇：
    boating，oil painting，take photos，social practice activities，bring sb．a lot of fun，increase one's confidence
    (2) 句式：
    ① Last week，I went to Guilin together with my parents，which I found of great fun．
    ② I was about to have a rest when I found a foreign teenager came to me．
    ③ He invited me to join him to take photos．I felt very happy and we had great fun together．
    ④ In my spare time，I usually take part in different kinds of social practice activities．
    ⑤ Personally，it is not only useful，but can also bring us a lot of fun．
    ⑥ In a word，with social practice，I am sure our school life will be more colorful and interesting．
    4．注意事项
    (1) 所写内容应该积极向上，不能漫无边际。
    (2) 在要点的组织安排上，注意文章的逻辑性和条理性。
    (3) 在确保完成写作要求的同时，巧用连接词和高级句式。
    满分文展示 1
My visit to Guilin is fun
    Last week，I went to Guilin together with my parents，(①which I found of great fun．)
    (②As soon as we arrived there，a few minutes' bus ride took us to Lijiang River．)(③Walking by the river is just like being in the oil painting!) We rented a boat and enjoyed the beautiful scenes along the river．
    After about twenty minutes' boating，we arrived at the bank．(④I was about to have a rest when I found a foreign teenager came to me．)He invited me to join him to take photos．I felt very happy and we had great fun together．
    Seven days later，I had to leave this beautiful place．(⑤I really hope I can be there again some day!)
    旁批
    1．正确地运用 which 引导的非限定性定语从句。一来可以点明所设主题，二来可以丰富文章句式。
    2．该句恰当地使用　as soon as 引导的状语从句，提升了文章的表达水准。
    3．此句巧用比喻修辞，使文章更加生动、形象，无疑成为本文中一道亮丽的风景线。
    4．be about to do... when... 的正确运用让人眼前一亮，表明作者扎实的语言功底。
    5．此句照应开头，展现作者难忘且有趣的桂林之旅，给人一种意犹未尽的感觉。
    满分揭秘
    本文为一篇记叙文，主要描述了小作者去游漓江的有趣经历。作者不但准确到位地表达了题目所暗含的内容，而且谋篇布局合乎情理，上下文之间衔接自然流畅。此外，文章句式结构丰富多彩，作者能够恰当地使用比喻修辞手法、定语从句、状语从句及固定句式，这些都充分展示了小作者高超的语言驾驭能力。
    标准范文
Cooking is fun
    Why is cooking fun? Here are two reasons．
    First，it is a good way to show my love to my parents．Both my parents are very busy．So when I come back home early，I'll cook for them．After they return，we sit together and enjoy the meal．I can see them smile happily．
    Second，it is a kind of creation．I always try to cook different dishes．When my new dish is praised by others，I feel proud．
    I like cooking．It brings me a lot of fun．
   
江西卷
    中考真题
    To：Emma@help.com
    Subject：Ask for your help
    Dear Emma，
    I have a problem and I need your help．My parents are really strict and never let me do anything! For example．when I go out with my friends，my mom always asks，"Where are you going? Who are you going with?" My parents want to control everything I do．I try to talk to them，but they don't listen．They say，"This is our house and these are our rules．"